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Monday 17 October 2016

lepa Holiday Highlight OR Immersion Assembly

My Holiday Highlight

WALT: write a recount about my school holiday  using effective paragraphs.
Topic: School Holidays.
Audience: PES, whanau, worldwide blog audience.
Purpose: To tell people about your holiday experiences.
Text type: Recount
Key Vocabulary and Sentence Beginnings:
delightful, joyful, overwhelmed, over the moon, fantastic, superb, on cloud nine

Have you ever been to…   Wow! What an exciting … Guess what?...During the school holidays …
Helpful Links: Brainstorm Vocab
Structure:
P1: Introduction: Who? What? When? Where? Why? How?
P2: One thing you did in the first week of the holidays
P3: One thing you did in the second week of the holidays
P4: Conclusion: What happened in the end? How did you feel about the experience? What did you enjoy the most? What do you hope for next time?
Once you have finished make sure to mark with a buddy or yourself using our PARAGRAPH RUBRIC. Draw an image that represents your writing in sumo paint/ABC paint or create a wordcloud.  


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Topic: Immersion Assembly
Audience: PES, whanau, worldwide blog audience.
Purpose: To tell people about our immersion assembly.
Text type: Recount Vocab
Key Vocabulary and Sentence Beginnings:
teachers, hilarious, delightful, joyful, overwhelmed, over the moon, fantastic, superb, on cloud nine

Wow! What an exciting … Guess what?... What a blast we had at…
Structure:
P1: Introduction: Who? What? When? Where? Why? How?
P2: What did the teachers in each team do?
P3: What happened next?
P3: Conclusion: What happened in the end? How did you feel about the experience? What did you enjoy the most? What do you hope for next time?

Start your writing here:


Monday: In the holidays… I went to my nana's and grandpa's house with my cousins simon and betty and my aunt and uncle ben and eseta in a van.When we got there I saw my nana and grandpa.Then I went to the living room then I sitted and watched my nana sky tv watching cartoons with my cousins.Then my cousins were tired and they were falling asleep so I carried them to my nana's bed.




While I was watching cartoon my aunty said “Do you want to eat dapies”she said.”yes please”I said.So she went to buy pies when I turn the sky off and played on my gandpas xbox360 the game what i was playing was Assassin Creed 3 and Mirror Edge.After that my aunty came and buyed my pies.


I was eating my pies and I heard my nana and grandpa snoring with my cousins too so I went to my nana's and grandpa's room and played on my grandpa's xbox 360 and played some games